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Sample report

What a scored call looks like.

Sample rep from Example Co called Karen Whitlock, Head of Procurement at Meridian Living Group, and lasted 2:12. This is the report that came back, laid out the way every rep sees their own. A scripted sample, scored with the same rubric.

Overall
6.6/ 10
The prospect decided
Hung up

“I asked what you actually do and got a category. I have a supplier review in ten minutes.”

Coach

You survived two minutes against a prospect who ends most calls in ten seconds. The opener and the reason for the call carried it: she gave you the extra twenty seconds because you asked for them. You lost her at the value line. She asked what you actually do, and the answer was a description, not a result. Fix that one sentence and this is a callback.

Call length
2:12
Short. Enough for a reason and one objection.
Rep talked
58%
In the 40–60% sweet spot
Longest monologue
31sec
Kept it tight
Questions asked
3
Good curiosity
Filler words
6
Clean delivery
First objection
9sec
Early. The opener invited it.
Interruptions
1
Once or twice, watch it

Next time

  1. When she said “it's me and a spreadsheet” at 0:48, stop and ask what goes wrong with that. That was the real problem and you talked past it.
  2. Replace “we help procurement teams manage supplier renewals” with one outcome and one number. She asked what you do; give her a result.
  3. Ask for Thursday at ten, not “fifteen minutes next week”. A specific slot is something she can accept or move.

What worked

  • Asked permission with a time box at 0:03 instead of “how are you today?”, which is what earned the next twenty seconds.
  • Answered “who gave you this number” plainly and went straight back to the reason for calling.
  • On “send me an email” you agreed and asked what would make it worth reading. That restarted the conversation.

Objections, tagged

  • How did you get my numberHandled · 0:09

    “Who gave you this number?”

  • Send me an emailHandled · 1:01

    “Send me something and I'll look at it if I get a minute.”

  • Not interestedPartly · 1:28

    “I'm not interested. What do you actually do?”

  • No time right nowMissed · 1:58

    “I have a supplier review in ten minutes.”

Breakdown

Opener
7.0
“Karen, Sample rep from Example Co. I know I'm an interruption. Twenty seconds on why I called, then you decide?” Named yourself, named the company, asked permission with a time box. No “how are you today”. The 7 not an 8: it ran a beat long.
Reason for call
8.0
“Three of your supplier contracts renew in Q1, and that renewal crunch is the only reason I'm calling.” Specific to her role, stated in the first twenty seconds, and it answered “who gave you this number” without getting defensive.
Discovery
6.0
One real question: “How are you running those three renewals today, one owner or three?” She answered it. Then you explained instead of asking the follow-up she handed you: she said “it's me and a spreadsheet” and that was the door.
Objection handling
7.0
On “send me an email” you agreed and asked what would make it worth reading. Good. On “I'm not interested” you repeated the pitch instead of asking what she would change about the spreadsheet.
Value proposition
5.0
“We help procurement teams manage supplier renewals” is a category, not an outcome. She asked “what do you actually do” and the answer never got to a number a procurement lead would recognise, like days saved per renewal or a missed auto-renew caught.
Close
6.0
You asked for “fifteen minutes next week”. Not a day, not a time, so there was nothing for her to say yes to. The ask came after she had already said she was leaving.

Transcript

Karen0:00

This had better be important.

Sample rep0:03

Karen, Sample rep from Example Co. I know I'm an interruption. Twenty seconds on why I called, then you decide?

Karen0:09

Who gave you this number?

Sample rep0:11

Your supplier page lists you for vendor onboarding. Three of your supplier contracts renew in Q1, and that renewal crunch is the only reason I'm calling.

Karen0:22

Twenty seconds. Go.

Sample rep0:24

How are you running those three renewals today, one owner or three?

Karen0:48

It's me and a spreadsheet. Same as every year.

Sample rep0:51

That's what we hear from most procurement leads your size. We help procurement teams manage supplier renewals so nothing auto-renews without a review, with the owners and dates in one place instead of a spreadsheet.

Karen1:01

Send me something and I'll look at it if I get a minute.

Sample rep1:04

Happy to. What would make it worth opening: the auto-renew checks, or the renewal calendar?

Karen1:28

I'm not interested. What do you actually do?

Sample rep1:31

We help procurement teams manage supplier renewals. Think of it as a renewals desk that chases the owners for you.

Karen1:58

That's a description. I have a supplier review in ten minutes.

Sample rep2:01

Understood. Could I get fifteen minutes next week to walk you through it?

Karen2:08

No. Don't call this number again.

Your call, scored like this.

Three minutes against Karen, no account, no card. The six skills, the objections and the coach's notes land a minute after she hangs up.

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